Audience feedback

1. As the soundtrack plays over the entire opening, we were advised not to do that and to add dialogue and sound effects at points such as; the opening of the book at the very start as the movies title appears on screen, and at the pair of scissors cuts down the camera it would be a good idea to have a attacking effect or a person/animal crying for help at it falls. 
2. A voice over is needed, to help build the narrative of the movie and to not make it look like a trailer for the movie, because at the current point it looks like a trailer for the movie which isn't showing enough to qualify it as a opening sequence. 
3. Advise on the transitions used were given also. The idea of having different effects and transitions to help jump from cut to cut were favoured over allowing a simple cut separating the different shots.