Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have really worked hard to get a great variety of films analysed Harvey, make sure you use what you have learnt in your planning of your film. Some of your analysis is detailed and you have made use of the DISTINCT format on many occasions.  

• Use DISTINCT in every post - and talk about all of the elements
• Just get the openings of the film embedded into your posts
• You need many more screen shots, ones that are relevant to the points that you are making.

I would appreciate it if you can reply to this post once you have addressed the points above.